Wednesday, October 2, 2013


In recent writings I have tried to be more descriptive and detailed. I tried to do this because I wanted it to be a good read. Also in some dialogue prompts I have avoided character names and simply wrote what they were saying so you could infer who they were. I tried this because it was very simple and a lot of fun to do. I liked writing like this so I shall continue to do so.


  1. I think it's good that you are trying to be more detailed. Keep up the good work.

  2. I love how descriptive you are in your writing. It definitely catches my attention and helps me image the scenes and the characters. Maybe you could help me become more descriptive? Will you try to make your pieces more descriptive in the future? -Sam S.

  3. Good descriptions makes a good read. Well done John!